Monday, 2 May 2016

draft Angel Creek Sally Rippin By Kade

Review
I did'nt like the begining  of chapter one because the auther had named all the charecters late but from chapter two and then on  the pictures in my head were amazing , the simmeles were great and the yext was very creative.

Reflect
The things i wanted to reflect on was.When jelly and here cousins went down to the creek jelly started to talk about the boy that drowned in the pipes near the creek but halfway through when there talking about the boy jelly changes the subject to something in the water .

Relate
The things i want to relate on is that i have been to a creek and swam in it at night but there was't a floating angel it was a big dirty brown log!
Retell
It was christmas eve and jelly and her cousins go down to the creek but they see something in the water it was an angel it had broken here wing if they didnt do something fast she was going to die.

1 comment:

  1. This is a well written response. I think this sounds like a great book.

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