Angel Creek Book Review
Retell
There are three children named Jelly , Pik and Gino. They were looking for something to do so they went down a dark spooky tunnel where they found an Angel.They took it to some where they could look after it because it had a damage wing. They found A shed to keep the Angel.
Relate
One day i went in a abounded tunnel with my brothers friends. Other one was when i found a bird with an injured wing like the angel. I have watched a movie with a Angel.
Reflect
You should have made the start more interesting. How long did this book take you to make and what inspired you to make it. What age limit do you put on this book.
Review
I like how you put some fiction in the book like the Angel {Well at least i don't think}. Make the words a little more easier to say.I like the way you put a lot of similes in.
You have included some interesting feedback in the review section , Will. My advice would be to read over your entry before you publish. Remember questions need question marks. It will be interesting to see what you think of the ending. I loved this book I found it to be very engaging.
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ReplyDeletethis book sounds amazing i wish i could read it!
DeleteMaybe the author felt it was important to introduce the characters and where they live and their relationship with each other. I love this book and can't wait to get to the ending. I remember going to a creek with my friend when I was a teenager. Sophia P. wants to read it next. Don't tell anyone the ending.
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