Monday, 30 May 2016

-Angel Creek-By Will C-

we have been reading this book in literacy groups.


Retell
Jelly, Gino and Pik have no where to hide the angel from these bullies thats safe. Jelly had a fight with Gino because they booth wanted it .But theirs one boy who she hasn't seen before. Christmas has also gone by and Jelly found a Bracelet from Gino that she always wanted.

Reflect
Question for the Author:
How long did this book take to publish?

What inspired you to write it?
Why is Jelly a name?

Review
I liked how you used a lot of similies in the text.
I liked how the names where very weird like Jelly Gino and Pik.
You used a multiple of adjectives.
I liked how you used easy words for kids to read.
Relate
Once I found something that i didn't want to tell anyone.
I've been in a tunnel before.
I have a baby cousin who has a pram.
I've seen lighting and thunder.
Ive seen a guy been hit by lighting on Youtube.








1 comment:

  1. Dear Will, I like how you included some questions to the author.
    Sincerely,
    Maeve

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