The Garden of Empress Cassia
Retell:
The main character is Mimi she "loves" art, she loves it like me. (T-S.) She lives in a two storey shop. And then she gets bullied by Gemma and her friends.Then her dad said that she was doing to much art that he band her from doing art. After that her art teacher gives her a box filled with magical pastels. She draws a beautiful drawing. At school she eats rice.(T-S.) Gemma went to Mimi's when Mimi wasn't looking Gemma took the magic pastels in her hands then................................................................... got sucked into the garden of darkness (painting).
Connections:
T-S is that Mimi loves art like me.
TS school Mimi eats rice with something else.
T-S my mum & dad used to sing a Irish lullaby to me when I was little.
T-S I painted a giant painting of a garden.
T-S Mimi is in Year 5.
TS school Mimi eats rice with something else.
T-S my mum & dad used to sing a Irish lullaby to me when I was little.
T-S I painted a giant painting of a garden.
T-S Mimi is in Year 5.
Nice job i liked how you seet it out
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